整体09年网络使用高于07年，除了books与learning使用率有所下降；07年shopping比例最高，tv最低。这里边很多句子都不完整，就你用了从句后，句子的谓语动词没了。

       因为这个图其实跟上次类似的地方在于，就两个年份，所以是先讲的07，再到了09，同一年份就看同颜色的，年份比较就有了那两个特例。下边是范文：

       The bar chart compares the online activities people chose to do in a UK city in two particular years: 2007 and 2009.

　　It is clear that in the year 2007，a comparatively large percentage of people used the Internet for some practical purposes: with the largest proportion of netizens using the internet for shopping (approximately 43%), then next is to buy books with 38%, followed by banking and learning. By contrast, a small proportion of people used the Internet for entertainment, constituting 25% (with video games and TV representing 15% and 10% respectively).

　　In comparison, most of the activities attracted a larger rate of people in 2009, whereas shopping for books and learning experienced a marginal decrease， each accounting for 30% and 25%. In contrast, a significant growth can be seen in the calories of shopping, booking and watching TV, rising by around 10%.

Overall, the chart suggests that in the year 2009 online shopping was still the most popular online activity, while more people used the Internet for entertainment.

范文在分类的时候，就是分的实用和娱乐两个方向。